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 STORY: The origin of Viliux CHAPTER 1

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PostSubject: STORY: The origin of Viliux CHAPTER 1   STORY: The origin of Viliux CHAPTER 1 Icon_minitimeMon Jun 30, 2008 7:20 am

Well, since i like writing i shall write my own story. It has nothing to do with the story written by Pizzaz, but i use the character from it.
This story is about Viliux (me). It will tell you where did i come from, how and why am i a hyperactive stickman.


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It was a hot summer evening, but the sun was still shining. Pizza and Crazy were talking outside and Viliux was sitting in his room. He was sleepy and bored. His legs and hands were tied to a char that was fixed to the ground. Viliux was punished for destroying Azza's house. Since he knew some magic the house was standing once again, but it took a lot of energy to do it.
At that moment it got a bit windy. And some stronger wind opened the window. Viliux opened his eyes, took a deep breath and before he knew, the chains were broken. He jumped out through the window screaming "I'm ALIVE!". "Not again" - thought Pizza. "Okay" -said Pizza "You can run around now. I'm too tired to chan you up AGAIN." Crazy looked at Viliux, confused on how could he do that and said " Well since he got out, why don't we go out and buy ouselves some candy?". Viliux jumped in the air and did the happy dance, but stopped when he heard "You won't get any".
When they got to the main street they were shocked: The candy store was all smashed up, so were all of the buildings there. "DO you have something to do with this, Viliux?" - Asked Pizza. "No.." - Viliux aswered. They carefully opened the door to the candy store. Suddenly someone pushed the door on the other side. The door was pushed so hard, it fell down revealing the pusher, that was about to run, but a whip caught its leg. The whip was held by Viliux. "Slimes" - he said. Pizza and Crazy stood, shocked and confused. After a second Viliux disapeared...

END OF CHAPTER 1
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PostSubject: Re: STORY: The origin of Viliux CHAPTER 1   STORY: The origin of Viliux CHAPTER 1 Icon_minitimeMon Jun 30, 2008 5:54 pm

Well, I said banana. Being it didn't rock(too short) and it didn't suck(good stuff in it)
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PostSubject: Re: STORY: The origin of Viliux CHAPTER 1   STORY: The origin of Viliux CHAPTER 1 Icon_minitimeMon Jun 30, 2008 11:08 pm

Where's ME in the story...
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PostSubject: Re: STORY: The origin of Viliux CHAPTER 1   STORY: The origin of Viliux CHAPTER 1 Icon_minitimeWed Jul 09, 2008 5:17 am

Its only the first chapter Very Happy i'l add everyone when i get home (in 2 days)
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PostSubject: Re: STORY: The origin of Viliux CHAPTER 1   STORY: The origin of Viliux CHAPTER 1 Icon_minitimeFri Jul 25, 2008 9:26 am

Amusing story but im guessing thats all of it?
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