Story Chapter 1 COMPLETE

Ok, basically I'm writing a story and going to put it in chapters here. So to make this more interactive, I'm going to need characters.
Here is my character, follow the format:

Name: Pizza
Preffered Weapon: Knives
Ability: Strengh
Personality: Calm

Name: Sanassar
Preffered Weapon: Blue Sword
Ability: Runs so fast that no one can see him
Personality: Calm

Name: Viliux
Preffered Weapon: Whip
Ability: Charm people
Personality: Clueless

Name: Azza
Preffered weapon: Wand
Abilities: Intelligence
Personality: Calm

Name: Crazy
Preffered weapon: Sword
Abilities: Healing
Personality: Crazy

Now submit YOUR OWN characters.(You better.)
Chapter 1

Quote :

It was a hot summer day in May. The last day to be exact. So close to June yet, this year, it didn't feel like life could still go on today. I was lying on a box watching after Viliux. This was not any normal day in any normal area. This day followed a series of events of which are astonishing, destructive and extremely dangerous. I was lucky to still be alive...
I had just started to adapt to this new lifestyle. It involved a large amount of running unfortunately, because in the heat of summer, it was difficult to keep up a steady pace. Anyway, moving on, here’s what happened. Me, Sanassar, and Viliux were going to meet Azza and Crazy in the old boathouse when Viliux thought there was a large amount of humidity in the air. Me and Sanassar shrugged him off and thought he was crazy (as he normally is) and kept on walking. By the time we got to the drinking stream our shirts were sticking to our backs. We ran to the river and began heavily drinking water.
Afterwards, when we were starting to walk again I could’ve sworn that I saw a small green feather floating in the stream. I went back to investigate and it seemed that hundreds of little green, flaky particles were in the water. It looked strange so I called Sanassar and Viliux. When they saw it, they too were shocked and out of nowhere once there was roughly a couple thousand they joined together and formed a type of fish, but not any kind of fish that I’ve seen. It was weird, with patches of scales missing, mangled looking fins, extremely sharp and roughly shaven teeth.
It was all downhill after that, it instantaneously began to enlarge and transform. Soon enough it was growing patches of fur and turning an odd shade of pale. We ran as fast as we could as soon as it started getting intimidating, but it was pretty late of us to run, it swiped us with an enlarging tail that we barely dodged. Then with its teeth it came down and hit Viliux’s leg. I knew he wasn’t going to last on his own now. With his small body and my burly arms I lifted him and Sanassar helped to carry him. The beast seemed to be satisfied and retreated back to its river den.
Once we were at the boathouse we saw Azza and Crazy waiting for us. Conversation broke out. Azza started talking first by saying
“Jesus, where the hell have you guys been? It’s been li- Oh my god!”
As soon as he saw Viliux he freaked out. Thank god Crazy’s dad was a field doctor in the war long ago. He kept his cool and took him from us, he went outside, cleaned out the cut with water from the river next to the boathouse, ripped off a piece of his shirt, and tied it above the cut, just incase. We told them what had happened and they were curious as to what had attacked us at the river. Me, Sanassar, and Azza went over to the emergency closet and got out 3 spears.
“Hey Crazy you’re gonna stay here right?” I asked
“Yeah, I have to stay with him incase one of those monsters comes out of the river here- Uh oh. Damn it!” Quickly he ran over to the emergency closet and grabbed out the blade in the back. He took it and put it to Viliux’s leg before I could say anything but “What are you doing with that?” Sparks flew and the severed leg bounced, now trembling I said,
“W-w-why did you do that?”
Completely ignoring me he struck the severed limb until it was in 4 parts. Then he sorted through it and he pulled out another mangled fish-like thing and jumped away, before I could do anything I heard a slight “Fwiiish” and the fish was pinned to the floor with a spear going directly through its gill-area. I turned around and saw Sanassar with his arm pointed at the area where the fish was stricken. He always did throw a good spear; I never thought it would come in handy like this though.

Name: Viliux27
Preffered Weapon: Whip
Ability: Charm people
Personality: Kickass type person

Viliux you can only has 1 ability so choose >:O
Btw it's not SO it's just a story.

Fixed

You didn't fix the weapon part T_T you're not limited to any wep.
(Cuz it kinda seems like you're limiting yourself to the SO set of weapons.)

Ok edited (once i again i first port edited and then edit the post :D:D)

Ok. (?)

Isn't that like something literally ON your computer?

Could I make another character?

Not really, I mean we still need Azza to make one and then we'll have enough. So I guess wait for him

Eh...

Azza get your nooby ass on this topic >:O

I have a very creative mind... I have alot of characters i can put but... I dont want to release them into public... Except my online creations: Crazy9090, Taser9090, Laser9090, Lazyrs9090(lazyrs for short)... It would be stupid if I made them... Its also wierd that i had a dream about them! i think it was like this... Crazy brings the sword and gun, taser brings the boxing glove and prank gun, laser brings the peppers and lazer goggles, and lazyrs brings a piece of everybody... I really dont like my mind... I think its stupid sounds stupid doesnt it?

Ok, I used Crazy with a sword only becuase i could not make sense of a lot of this post.
~Pizzaz

Wtf? Is that supposed to be your character?

yeah it is. But im not sure if im making it into a character

Name: Azza (Duh?)
Preffered weapon: Wand
Abilities: Intelligence
Personality: Calm

Ok added.
On a side note, stop making god damn calm people, people! Copycats. lol.

I like the story

Change my personality back
Well i like the story, but i would also like to have a wooden leg . Just like a pirate!

WAIT WAIT WAIT! I didn't want it to be crazy! (sorry crazy). I want it to be Lazyrs! if its not too late...


Name:Lazyrs
Weapon: Crazy's sword
Ability: Healing (from taser's peppers )
Personality: Impatient

No name changes! UBUBUBUH!!! Besides, this story is somewhat supposed to keep seriousness.

*pouts* I want my character the way i want it! u didnt ask my permission! And you didn't give me a present for not giving me a present! And you didnt give me adaofvadsvasv!


Okay i just wanted to spam there... But i want my character to be lazyrs... not crazy! now crazy's mad at you! i didnt get a chance to read the story cuz its too long, but ill read it now... >.>

Joo beta.

CHANGE MY PERSONALITY BACK!!!!!!!!!

I want mine's changed too! I'm gonna copy what villiux said!